Thursday, 1 September 2016

Writing portfoilo post Troy

Description: for writing this term we have watched a video about te is balls and then wrote some words about then crossed out any words related to tennis then wrote a story this is my story










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  1. Tom, what an amazing piece of writing you have done. I really liked your perseverance to write a lengthy story. Next time it would be great to see you focus on some paragraphing and when using speech, making sure it is clear who is saying what.

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